雅思寫作對語法的準確性是有要求的,如果在雅思寫作中出現太多的語法錯誤,影響閱卷老師的閱讀,會影響最后的考試成績。下面總結了雅思寫作中that的常見錯誤用法,同學們自己如果也有這些情況要及時改正。
錯誤一
The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking lamb in 1980 and beef in 1989.
解析:本句主語為the consumption of chicken, 交點的表達為overtaking lamb ..and beef, 前后都比較對象不一致。
修改:The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that ofbeef in 1989.
錯誤二
Watching TV was most popular, with more than 90 percent of children and 85% teenagers doing this activity.That high percentages contrasted sharply with the low ones in terms of taking art classes, ranging from 40% to 60%.
解析:本段第二句使用了that 做指代,避免重復,但是that 后面的名詞為復數形式,前后形式不一致。
修改:.......Those high percentages contrasted sharply with the low ones in terms of taking art classes, ranging from 40% to 60%.
錯誤三
a. People used to live in houses with huge outdoor areas like a garden or backyard, but this is no longer possible for many people as a result of the relentless development of urbanization. I believe that is a positive trend.
解析:本段第二句表達個人觀點,that 在本句中含義不清,引發歧義:i believe that ( 賓語從句引導詞) vs that is a positive trend( 從句主語).
修改:.... I believe that this change/ it is a positive trend.
b. One reason for this trend is many people think it is more relaxing to spend their off-work time with their friends in such places as tearooms or cafes.
解析:本句為表語從句,從句缺少連接詞that, 引發歧義:one reason for this trend is many people vs many people think.
修改:One reason for this trend is that many people think it is more relaxing to spend their off-work time with their friends in such places as tearooms or cafes.
錯誤四
Throwing away breeds over-consumption, that in turn will cause many problems for us.
解析:本句為定語從句, that 不能放在逗號之后,引導非限定性定語從句
修改:Throwing away breeds over-consumption, which in turn will cause many problems for us.
在雅思寫作中that比較關系常出現,名詞單復需對應(that/those),從句that多保留,逗號that不連用。
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